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06-19-2005, 06:58 AM | #1 |
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Hey guys, this was my first attempt at writing songs and only managed to write it when drunk off my head. Its pretty sketchy, not really kind of stuff id like to write about, but it just came straight out my brain one night. Has no title either
people come and people go but those that hurt seem to stay love can tear two apart or bring them together but what if it did the same you burst into my life like a firework then you left like a dying flame but your still here haunting me i still want you even though it pains me just to think of you come back to me fill this hole thats left before it consumes whats left of me you burst into my life like a firework then you left like a dying flame but your still here haunting me
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06-19-2005, 02:37 PM | #2 |
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beautiful..if i wrote it , i would have went for a long title , like This >>> Haunting By A Passion In A Dying Flame ... i liked it Dear
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ditto, cs...i like it too...it was quite good for a first attempt at lyrics and i can see/hear the possibilities...as for a title...hmmm...how about "Flash"...because of how it talks about coming in like fireworks and leaving a dying flame...just a thought...
keep writing...that was well done...
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i liked it youve got some talent there
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06-20-2005, 05:29 PM | #5 |
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i like my long title
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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so did i...
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I like it too, nice song.
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