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Muad'Dib 06-19-2005 06:58 AM

Undecided On Title
 
Hey guys, this was my first attempt at writing songs and only managed to write it when drunk off my head. Its pretty sketchy, not really kind of stuff id like to write about, but it just came straight out my brain one night. Has no title either :o

people come
and people go
but those that hurt
seem to stay

love
can tear two apart
or bring them together
but what if
it did the same

you burst into my life
like a firework
then you left
like a dying flame
but your still here
haunting me

i still want you
even though it pains me
just to think of you

come back to me
fill this hole thats left
before it consumes
whats left of me

you burst into my life
like a firework
then you left
like a dying flame
but your still here
haunting me

creedsister 06-19-2005 02:37 PM

:) beautiful..if i wrote it , i would have went for a long title , like This >>> Haunting By A Passion In A Dying Flame ... i liked it Dear

Ann Allusion 06-20-2005 04:08 PM

ditto, cs...i like it too...it was quite good for a first attempt at lyrics and i can see/hear the possibilities...as for a title...hmmm...how about "Flash"...because of how it talks about coming in like fireworks and leaving a dying flame...just a thought...;)

keep writing...that was well done... :)

Anna1011 06-20-2005 05:03 PM

i liked it youve got some talent there

creedsister 06-20-2005 05:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Ann Allusion
ditto, cs...i like it too...it was quite good for a first attempt at lyrics and i can see/hear the possibilities...as for a title...hmmm...how about "Flash"...because of how it talks about coming in like fireworks and leaving a dying flame...just a thought...;)

keep writing...that was well done... :)

:) i like my long title :)

Ann Allusion 06-20-2005 05:57 PM

Quote:

:) i like my long title:)

so did i... :)

MissSeeker 06-21-2005 09:12 AM

I like it too, nice song.


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