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Old 01-16-2004, 02:58 AM   #1
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Thoughts of Suicide

"The hopeless world,it burns
The sands of time,they turn
The memories we had, they're all no more
The moments we shared, they're all tourchered

We're the hopeless,we have no where to turn
Body's are dropping everywhere,will we ever learn?
We just never thought it could happen to you
We always thought you knew what was true
I guess we were all wrong
Thats the reason I had to write this song

Just moments ago it happend
And we could feel the world start to beckon
We all felt the world stop turning
As the the chanes of death started burning

Our tears, they fall in the night
They break to peices and shed no light
They scream the words you cannot hear
They are broken into fear

You couldnt try to say
The words that would take away
These thousand tears we've cried
For after all you commited suicide"


I just wrote this a second ago,hope you like it
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Old 01-16-2004, 08:59 AM   #2
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Wow, excellent. Keep up the great work. And it really has a unique point to it, good job.
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Old 01-16-2004, 02:58 PM   #3
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Wow That Was Very Moving I Can Feel The Hurt And Pain In Everyword You Wrote It Well My
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Old 01-16-2004, 06:22 PM   #4
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DEEP, MAN VERY DEEP . You have a flare for writing some great work.
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Old 01-16-2004, 06:37 PM   #5
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Very good Kevin
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Old 01-16-2004, 06:38 PM   #6
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What??? You guys liked that???
Well,thanks!!! I am gonna write "Beautiful as Hell" now...its taking me a long time to write because of the way i want it written,but you guys will (hopefully) be happy with it. (Im still hoping it comes out good,haha)
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Old 01-16-2004, 06:43 PM   #7
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I liked it cuz I can relate to the feelings in it
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Old 01-16-2004, 06:53 PM   #8
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OK,well,thanks
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Old 01-16-2004, 06:54 PM   #9
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I don't know anyone that has committed suicide or even tried, I've never tried either but I thought about it more than once in my life when I went through some really tough times
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ohh,im sorry to hear that Julie,but Im glad you pulled through
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Old 01-16-2004, 07:07 PM   #11
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Thanks I'm glad to!
Really glad that time in my life is past me now
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Quote: (Originally Posted by MrSeeker) What??? You guys liked that???
Well,thanks!!! I am gonna write "Beautiful as Hell" now...its taking me a long time to write because of the way i want it written,but you guys will (hopefully) be happy with it. (Im still hoping it comes out good,haha)
im sure it will as always
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Quote: (Originally Posted by JulieLovesCreed) I don't know anyone that has committed suicide or even tried, I've never tried either but I thought about it more than once in my life when I went through some really tough times
awww julie im sorry to here that ive been to the point were i came a hair of doing so but praise god and creed of course im here telling you about this right now Peace
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Its good that your here to
It sucks during times like that BIG TIME!
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Old 01-16-2004, 11:44 PM   #15
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Quote: (Originally Posted by JulieLovesCreed) Its good that your here to
It sucks during times like that BIG TIME!
tell me about it
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