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Old 03-02-2003, 02:27 PM   #1
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One of my poems.

I hope you like it.

Mirror, Mirror

Mirror, Mirror
What are you trying to show me?
Is that my reflection I see?
No, no. It can’t be
Mirror, Mirror
Spiritually, I feel cold and wet
That’s not my reflection I’ll bet
Mirror, Mirror
My soul doesn’t seem pure
It’s me Satan’s trying to lure
I haven’t been myself
My spirit is on the devil’s bookshelf
Mirror, Mirror
Show me who I really am
Instead of who I’ve become
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Old 03-02-2003, 08:54 PM   #2
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No one likes it?
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Old 03-03-2003, 07:17 PM   #3
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i liked it
Very good poem:P
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i like it too
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Old 03-11-2003, 07:02 PM   #5
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Thanks.
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