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Old 03-11-2004, 09:36 PM   #1
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Inky's Poems!!!!

Unspoken

I hear unspoken promises
When I’m enraptured by your voice
See so many beautiful things etched
In the green of your eyes
Feel so many new things when
You touch me ever so gently…
I’m falling into this pit so deep
Feeling you holding me
Even though I can’t see you
Feel your hands under me
Eyes upon me
Voice holding me just outside…
Just outside your realm of
Consciousness and faded reality
Of lies and deceit, Marring
My dream world so pure…
So clear and sharp to my eye…
And there you are,
Fighting back the lies,
Holding in check the deceit,
Keeping me safe….
No more faded reality
Just dreams untainted
Of you and me
Decidedly, we’ve had enough,
My beloved and I.
So we stand upon Astral hill
And bid your world goodbye,
With silver swords and Magic spells,
The portal to your dull excuse for a world
Shatters

And we are free.


* okay i thought it was bad.... *
Any comments?
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Nothing from nowhere, I'm no one at all
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Old 03-11-2004, 11:33 PM   #2
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I liked It!!!!!!!!!!

Fall into this pit So Deep~~Feeling you holding me~Even though i cant see you. Feel Your Hands Under me eyes up on me~~ I thought It was}}} Deep. And Sweet. And I felt A lot Of hidden emotions In This One. Like The person it was written by. Is just dying To tell The Person its written too How He Or She Feels from Deep Inside!!! Which is like all poetry for that matter!!
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Old 03-12-2004, 07:04 PM   #3
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Welcome Inky. I like your name and I liked your poem. Very romantic. See you around!
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Old 03-13-2004, 11:27 AM   #4
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Very beautiful indeed Ink

I'm impressed!!
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Souls...
they float like the memories I've opened,
Go...
and kiss all the butterflies I've broken,
Sow...
their wings to the coat of my misfortune,
Grow...
to reach the plains only I have spoken...


The Path ~by~ ManMade God
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Old 03-15-2004, 03:26 PM   #5
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very interesting poem, beautiful also, I loved it
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Old 03-15-2004, 09:09 PM   #6
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"I have multiple personalities, my friend."~Scott Stapp

HAHA! i liked that quote cause that means he's like me!!! j/k

anyway thank you all for the support. I really needed it...

With You While You Dream
by Inky the Loon

Lying beside you tonight,
I hear your every breath,
I can see you smile, still asleep.

I wish I could see your dreams,
I feel you tighten your hand on mine,
I wonder if they are of me?

Because i know mine are of you,
And kisses on beaches,under moonlight shards,
And palm trees, in the night a shadow in dark blue.

Lying beside you tonight, nothing can bring me down,
I kiss you and you smile,
I am a queen, forget the crown.

I like that one the best i think
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"I fell into yesterday
Our dreams seemed not far away
I want to, I want to, I want to stay
I fell into fantasy."
Days of the Pheonix
By AFI

Miseria Cantare (The Beginning)

Nothing from nowhere, I'm no one at all
Radiate, recognize one silent call
As we all form one dark flame... Incinerate
Love your hate, your faith lost
You are now one of us
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Old 03-16-2004, 01:20 PM   #7
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Another Home Run

That One Was Darn Good To Inky Binky Winky Girl
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Old 03-16-2004, 07:32 PM   #8
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More......

Okay this one's kinda depressing... My best friend Alexandra and I wrote it...

Goddess of Sorrow

I am the Goddess of Sorrow
Angel of Tears
Deity of the Never- Ending Darkness

Dressed in midnight black
My ashen wings lay broken
Across my stab-scarred back
I am the Goddess of Sorrow

This pain inside
It just won’t leave
Eating away at my soul
I am the Angel of Tears

Crying crimson tears outside
Weeping my soul away inside
Soon I’ll be in total darkness
A Hell full of deadly sins
I am the Goddess of Sorrow

Beaten down
Into the Ring of Fire
No escape, to be happy and free
My one desire
But this can never be
Thus I am the Angel of Tears

No one worships me
I stand alone and betrayed
Defeated by the cruel men
My black heart was slain
My back stabbed as I lay dying
I am the Goddess of Sorrow
Angel of Tears
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"I fell into yesterday
Our dreams seemed not far away
I want to, I want to, I want to stay
I fell into fantasy."
Days of the Pheonix
By AFI

Miseria Cantare (The Beginning)

Nothing from nowhere, I'm no one at all
Radiate, recognize one silent call
As we all form one dark flame... Incinerate
Love your hate, your faith lost
You are now one of us
Also by AFI
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Old 03-16-2004, 10:22 PM   #9
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10 10 10 10 10

A Perfect 10 >>Inky Binky winky U Got It Down!!! Hehe. ANd I Wanna Know U Because Ur So Damn Cool~~Ugly Kid Joe
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Old 03-16-2004, 11:31 PM   #10
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Me? Cool? i'm that girl at school that has long distance boy friends and reads in the corner at dances... and hangs with the goths and is always misunderstood... ME? COOL? That's news... No i'm not trying to be sarcastic..

Singing Out The Sorrow
by Inky the Looneyful

Singing out the Sorrow

At night I hear your sweet voice sing,
Taking lift on angel’s wing,
Enrapturing me with a solitary note,
Across the blood red sky it floats.

I answer back with a sad song,
Of loneliness and carrying on,
Of faded kisses in the summertime,
Remembered with verses in rhyme.

Every night I imagine hearing your soft voice,
Leaving you go was not my choice.
Tasting again your sun-bathed lips,
Feeling again your hands upon my tan hips.

I sing to you of deepest sorrow,
Seeping deeper by the morrow,
Making me remember you,
Your eyes so gentle, our love so true.


* dedicated to Mace, I miss you *
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"I fell into yesterday
Our dreams seemed not far away
I want to, I want to, I want to stay
I fell into fantasy."
Days of the Pheonix
By AFI

Miseria Cantare (The Beginning)

Nothing from nowhere, I'm no one at all
Radiate, recognize one silent call
As we all form one dark flame... Incinerate
Love your hate, your faith lost
You are now one of us
Also by AFI
(afi stands for a fire inside)
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Old 03-16-2004, 11:34 PM   #11
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Simply Beautiful
by Astarael

Simply beautiful is
the shine in your eyes,
Made by fire behind them,
I pray this flame ne'er dies.

Simply beautiful is
The way you try not to stare,
And the way you run
Your tender fingers through your hair.

Simply beautiful is
the way you kiss my lips,
Like a humming bird drinking nectar,
In tiny little sips.

Simply beautiful is
How you make me feel,
When you tell me i'm an angel,
And that holding me is surreal.

* yet another... what can i say? i'm good and inspired*
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"I fell into yesterday
Our dreams seemed not far away
I want to, I want to, I want to stay
I fell into fantasy."
Days of the Pheonix
By AFI

Miseria Cantare (The Beginning)

Nothing from nowhere, I'm no one at all
Radiate, recognize one silent call
As we all form one dark flame... Incinerate
Love your hate, your faith lost
You are now one of us
Also by AFI
(afi stands for a fire inside)
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Old 03-16-2004, 11:46 PM   #12
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Whooooooooooooooooooooooo

That was Good Inky binky Winky!!! Im A Bit Misunderstood Me Self
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Old 03-16-2004, 11:50 PM   #13
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lmao you just love to rhyme with my name don't u? Lmao it's all good though...

* i have adh.... OH LOOK A CHICKEN!!!!*
LMAO
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"I fell into yesterday
Our dreams seemed not far away
I want to, I want to, I want to stay
I fell into fantasy."
Days of the Pheonix
By AFI

Miseria Cantare (The Beginning)

Nothing from nowhere, I'm no one at all
Radiate, recognize one silent call
As we all form one dark flame... Incinerate
Love your hate, your faith lost
You are now one of us
Also by AFI
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Old 03-17-2004, 02:07 AM   #14
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yES i KNOW HE JUST RAN PAST ME AND TOOK A RIGHT INKY BINKY WINKY
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Old 03-17-2004, 01:15 PM   #15
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Yay!!!

You understand!!! Her name is Taloola the second... because my best friend manda killed her predicessor... lol

My POEM

As you Are

I wanted you to know
I love you as you are,
Imperfectiopns make you perfect,
Scars make you who you are

So don't change yourself just to suit me,
I love you as you are,
And i pray you love me too,
Every mistake breath and scar
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"I fell into yesterday
Our dreams seemed not far away
I want to, I want to, I want to stay
I fell into fantasy."
Days of the Pheonix
By AFI

Miseria Cantare (The Beginning)

Nothing from nowhere, I'm no one at all
Radiate, recognize one silent call
As we all form one dark flame... Incinerate
Love your hate, your faith lost
You are now one of us
Also by AFI
(afi stands for a fire inside)
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