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07-15-2004, 07:11 PM | #1 |
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No End
The point in this one is shaded and could really be anything but i thought u might like it anyway.
Don’t stumble! You have to get up! Keep running and you will be ok We get a little bit further every day But we have to keep moving! Although my legs are weak and the pains consuming My heart is racing and these thoughts confusing But I still know I can win this race Although I stumble and I cant keep their pace There are so many stronger that don’t even place And even they seem so far by now I want to win but I don’t know how And while thinking these thoughts the assurance set in That I’ll never make it further than this Iv stumbled here again I’m not strong here and I can never win I made it nowhere and I will never see the end So I suppose I wasn’t meant for this race I’m not meant to be here in this place And even though I don’t know where I should go I know its not here There is nothing left to gain There are so many things left to fear The only thing left for me is to move on Its been far to long Its time to move on |
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very good i like alot and your right about moving on but sometimes its like the hardest thing for me to do but anyways that was really good.
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07-15-2004, 11:21 PM | #3 |
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That was Awsome I was really in to the opening Thank you Rules For Another HomeRun
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07-16-2004, 09:51 PM | #4 |
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wonderful poem
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walks a dark and lonely highway...found a song to lift me up...let me cover, let me guide you, be the one to teach you love |
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