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Re: My Amend
its always interesting to hear how other countrys celebrate their holidays WE JUST GET DRUNK AND BE SOMEBODY here in the good old usa and make resoloutions we never keep HELLO but i on the other hand am not apart percent of that majortiy i like these lines in your poem So Stop Your Regrets And LEAVE THEME BEHIND TO MUCH IS JUST A WASTE OF TIME So Stop the bullshit thoughts THAT ONLY KEEP YOU DOWN Good Job liked it
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yes indeed now that i review this piece of potery, it could have reached deeper point of views, but still my friend worth reviewing ..... peace be with us in jesus name blessings and strengeth, its been a struggling year already to get caught up, for us all A BIG GOD BLESS YA,
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