Another one of my poems

[SmEeKy]

Golden Diamond

Uniqueness came abroad my mind
when a thought prepared to interfere
A golden diamond fell from the heavens
when the stars collapsed expanding brightness
It landed upon the palm of my hand
with an intense power and clarity
Unfurling til illumination grasped my soul
with a profoundness
A glance depleted my negative thoughts
and embraced my spirit
The golden diamond inspired my physical form
and certified my mind with gratification
The boundless energy layed positively
in my mind until
the golden diamond fully manipulated my soul


:angel:

[goddess_bb]

Again a beautifully visual poem..is the diamond the spirit of God??
Or what does the diamond represent...or is it just a beautiful diamond that fell out the sky and with it's beauty dominated you?? Such a lovely poem, I really like what you write..keep it up!! I hope you don't mind questions it's just my way of telling you that I really "think" about what you write...which I hope you take as a compliment...I try to not think about stupid stuff and waste my time understand what I am saying??

[SmEeKy]

Hey thanks a lot :). Yeah I understand what you're saying. You're very nice :) and I'm really glad u like my poems.

Well what my poem actually means is that the diamond is a "truth" that was sent from God to me. That "truth" opened my mind and made me realize God's love for me.

[SmEeKy]

...like that diamond was a gift to me from God :D

[JulieCitySlicker]

That was very good SmEeKy:angel:

[SmEeKy]

Thanks Julie :)

[goddess_bb]

Actually Smeeky that's the impression I got..just wanted to make sure...some people get offended if you misinterpret what they are saying...

[SmEeKy]

yeah u are right