Another one of my poems

SmEeKy · 05-20-2003, 10:12 PM

Golden Diamond

Uniqueness came abroad my mind
when a thought prepared to interfere
A golden diamond fell from the heavens
when the stars collapsed expanding brightness
It landed upon the palm of my hand
with an intense power and clarity
Unfurling til illumination grasped my soul
with a profoundness
A glance depleted my negative thoughts
and embraced my spirit
The golden diamond inspired my physical form
and certified my mind with gratification
The boundless energy layed positively
in my mind until
the golden diamond fully manipulated my soul

goddess_bb · 05-21-2003, 12:22 AM

Again a beautifully visual poem..is the diamond the spirit of God??
Or what does the diamond represent...or is it just a beautiful diamond that fell out the sky and with it's beauty dominated you?? Such a lovely poem, I really like what you write..keep it up!! I hope you don't mind questions it's just my way of telling you that I really "think" about what you write...which I hope you take as a compliment...I try to not think about stupid stuff and waste my time understand what I am saying??

SmEeKy · 05-21-2003, 03:05 PM

Hey thanks a lot

. Yeah I understand what you're saying. You're very nice

and I'm really glad u like my poems.

Well what my poem actually means is that the diamond is a "truth" that was sent from God to me. That "truth" opened my mind and made me realize God's love for me.

SmEeKy · 05-21-2003, 03:06 PM

...like that diamond was a gift to me from God

JulieCitySlicker · 05-21-2003, 03:12 PM

That was very good SmEeKy

SmEeKy · 05-21-2003, 03:30 PM

Thanks Julie

goddess_bb · 05-21-2003, 04:33 PM

Actually Smeeky that's the impression I got..just wanted to make sure...some people get offended if you misinterpret what they are saying...

SmEeKy · 05-23-2003, 12:05 AM

yeah u are right

05-20-2003, 10:12 PM	#1
SmEeKy USER INFO » Status: Broken Dream Posts: 171 Joined: Apr 2003 Currently: Offline	Another one of my poems Golden Diamond Uniqueness came abroad my mind when a thought prepared to interfere A golden diamond fell from the heavens when the stars collapsed expanding brightness It landed upon the palm of my hand with an intense power and clarity Unfurling til illumination grasped my soul with a profoundness A glance depleted my negative thoughts and embraced my spirit The golden diamond inspired my physical form and certified my mind with gratification The boundless energy layed positively in my mind until the golden diamond fully manipulated my soul

05-21-2003, 12:22 AM	#2
goddess_bb USER INFO » Status: Strong Inside Posts: 1,498 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Again a beautifully visual poem..is the diamond the spirit of God?? Or what does the diamond represent...or is it just a beautiful diamond that fell out the sky and with it's beauty dominated you?? Such a lovely poem, I really like what you write..keep it up!! I hope you don't mind questions it's just my way of telling you that I really "think" about what you write...which I hope you take as a compliment...I try to not think about stupid stuff and waste my time understand what I am saying?? __________________ Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~

05-21-2003, 03:12 PM	#5
JulieCitySlicker USER INFO » Status: Taken Higher Posts: 15,310 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	That was very good SmEeKy __________________ Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot

05-21-2003, 04:33 PM	#7
goddess_bb USER INFO » Status: Strong Inside Posts: 1,498 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Actually Smeeky that's the impression I got..just wanted to make sure...some people get offended if you misinterpret what they are saying... __________________ Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~

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05-21-2003, 03:05 PM	#3
SmEeKy USER INFO » Status: Broken Dream Posts: 171 Joined: Apr 2003 Currently: Offline	Hey thanks a lot . Yeah I understand what you're saying. You're very nice and I'm really glad u like my poems. Well what my poem actually means is that the diamond is a "truth" that was sent from God to me. That "truth" opened my mind and made me realize God's love for me.

05-21-2003, 03:06 PM	#4
SmEeKy USER INFO » Status: Broken Dream Posts: 171 Joined: Apr 2003 Currently: Offline	...like that diamond was a gift to me from God

05-21-2003, 03:30 PM	#6
SmEeKy USER INFO » Status: Broken Dream Posts: 171 Joined: Apr 2003 Currently: Offline	Thanks Julie

05-23-2003, 12:05 AM	#8
SmEeKy USER INFO » Status: Broken Dream Posts: 171 Joined: Apr 2003 Currently: Offline	yeah u are right

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