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Sam16
03-15-2003, 08:43 PM
Hey guys, looks like I wont be on for a long time so I just wanted to say thanks for lifting my spirits and readin my poems, I guess ill leave ya with this one, bye :( ((((creeder)))





Only Hiding

Beginning to see through the selfless cover
Not wanting me to know what’s to think of another
But also knowing you couldn’t hide forever
The truth was never your kind of clever
All those you fooled now starting to slip away
Now seeing more than your lie they refuse to stay
The dark that covered the purpose now turned to day
But it’s never to late to walk the other way




Ending never

Stumbling in the dark seeing no light
Cant stay focused can no longer fight
Feeling the cold surround me nothing went right
I don’t think I can linger through another dark night
I would call for help but by now its to late
Should I run or surrender to my undeserved fate
I see a small light but I feel its just bait
I cant run to it anyway in this weakened state
I tried to fool myself to believe something would begin
No matter the consequence I’ll never give in
Ill just stand and fight till my coming end

JulieCitySlicker
03-15-2003, 08:47 PM
Hey There!
I hope you had a good time here;) Hope you come back soon! Its nice to have ya here:angel: Take care!

hotforscott
03-15-2003, 08:48 PM
Sorry to see you go. We hope you will be back soon. We have enjoyed your poems, let us hear from you. I hope everything is okay.

SCOTTSMYMAN
03-16-2003, 09:41 PM
I like your poems. So sorry to hear you're going. Liked coming on here and reading your stuff. Come back soon ok!!:dancing: :dancing: