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Old 03-30-2005, 05:05 PM   #1
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Wind Song

Wind Song

High on a hill
The wind sang a song...
Sung to the world
About all that was wrong
Sung to the world
About all that was right
The hymn lasted all day
And into the nite...
This song of life
This song of love
Fell on deaf ears
Below and above...
Still the world slept
The sleep of the dead
Missing the beauty
In what the wind said...
There were a few
Whose hearts were alive
That heard every word
Upon which they thrived...
When the sun rose
Bringing promise of morning
Those that believed
Found it all quite transforming...
They heard what was said
And knew all along
The truth they were seeking
Was in the wind's song...

©2005
Susan D.
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 03-30-2005, 09:59 PM   #2
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i really liked it it was an amazing writing it was written so well
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Old 04-02-2005, 12:26 PM   #3
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I agree it was written very well good job!
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Dancing around...
With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...
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Old 04-02-2005, 12:35 PM   #4
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thank you both for the comments...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 04-02-2005, 01:16 PM   #5
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Your Welcome I give It A 10 It Was Awsome
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