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Old 12-08-2003, 07:36 PM   #1
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I will take whats wrong and make it right

I,ve heard your tears and all your fears i know all your thoughts and struggels that life has put you through you do not know the pain you,ve caused me because you wont let me in i hear you knocking the time has come for you to let me in and i know by my blood we can surley win i wont promise you that it will be easy but you will i can only promise you this in the end you will win and on the road to the end i will be your best friend and i will remind you that we all fall now in then but i promise you we will win and before you hit bottom i will always come down to bring you back when you think your mind can hack no more i will show up to prove it can be restored because your love means more so bring to me i will take whats wrong and make it right again before the last tear drop falls to the ground i will be there before it soaks and is turned back to rain i will take whats wrong and make it right again im calling out your name can you hear me through your pain cant you see we,ve got so much to gain give it to me i will take whats wrong and make it rite i know you dont think so rite now my child but im the only one who knows how,,if you just meet me half way back to calavary and just show me the faith of a mustard seed i will take whats wrong and make it rite and move you to a new place that only dreamers reach and some only teach give it to me i will take whats wrong and make it rite i will take you to new height were no flight can reach,,give it to me i will take whats wrong and make it right,,look for me were they left me to die there i will dry all tears from your eyes
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Old 12-10-2003, 10:59 PM   #2
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Very nicely written! It's really good!
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Old 12-10-2003, 11:18 PM   #3
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thanks alota again
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