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11-17-2003, 02:06 AM
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See her shiver
Steps you trace Cup your hands Around her face Draw her closer Aim your gun Zero in on Heart so young Can’t escape uneasy feeling Leaves her wanting, senses reeling Fills her head with empty words Feeds her hungry voice unheard Kiss her gently Sweet your smile Can’t resist your Touching guile Stroke her hair Web you weave Watch her fall You make believe Can’t escape uneasy feeling Leaves her wanting, senses reeling Fills her head with empty words Feeds her hungry voice unheard Hear him stammer Truth now clear Tries to make It seem sincere See her bitter Stare so cold Sticks the knife In loveless soul
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11-17-2003, 06:03 AM
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I don't want to sound like Bill Clinton here, but I can definitely feel her pain. Really really good, DS!!
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11-17-2003, 06:08 PM
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Another great one!
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11-17-2003, 11:35 PM
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Sounds like the little gal had a time at it,,,it ,,,were do ya come up with this stuff,,DS
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything 
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11-17-2003, 11:49 PM
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LOL, Creedsister., I don't know where it comes from half the time
 ...I've always written in some form just to get stuff out when I can't talk to anyone. Sometimes, what I write has nothing to do with what I wanted to get out in the first place, LOL....Teri and Iced....thanks much... 
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11-17-2003, 11:58 PM
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your,,welcome
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Kerri, I LOVED it. I have soo enjoyed reading your poetry of late! I could so feel her pain in that poem. You poems have been all so deep and emotional! Keep posting you have such a talent for words! Writing is such a great outlet! Keep'em coming!!
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Thanks so much, Kris!
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<!--QuoteBegin-SCOTTSMYMAN+11-18-2003 02:10 PM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (SCOTTSMYMAN @ 11-18-2003 02:10 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin-->Kerri, I LOVED it. I have soo enjoyed reading your poetry of late! I could so feel her pain in that poem. You poems have been all so deep and emotional! Keep posting you have such a talent for words! Writing is such a great outlet! Keep'em coming!![/b][/quote]
My Words exactly, Scottsmyman!
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great,i like it very much
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