a happy one (kinda)

CreedGuy16 · 10-09-2003, 10:55 PM

a kinda happy one i guess, hope ya like it

Life I Wont Miss

visions of the past still fading away
still hearing echos of things I didn’t say
I see all of this and sit awhile to rest
feeling some of these burdens free from my chest
but with all of these things now taking place
scars of my past still show on my face
my load has been lightened but is not yet free
wounds iv created still are killing me
the light now shines as I thought it never would
but things still killing like I don’t think they should
they will never go away for they lives on in my mind
still wishing so hard that id left them behinde
but I cant ask for more, lord god iv gained all this
Iv escaped all that life, a life I wont miss

JulieCitySlicker · 10-09-2003, 11:00 PM

Very nice creedguy

I liked it a lot:P

SCOTTSMYMAN · 10-10-2003, 10:47 AM

nice poem! I liked it!

Siana · 10-11-2003, 06:59 AM

that's a good 1

Creed_Defaultgirl · 11-02-2003, 01:23 AM

this is awesome, I really like!

creedsister · 11-02-2003, 10:10 AM

Aint No future past in the past creedguy16....it was good well written.....your go boy........peace

10-09-2003, 10:55 PM	#1
CreedGuy16 USER INFO » Status: Illusion Posts: 16 Joined: Aug 2003 Currently: Offline	a happy one (kinda) a kinda happy one i guess, hope ya like it Life I Wont Miss visions of the past still fading away still hearing echos of things I didn’t say I see all of this and sit awhile to rest feeling some of these burdens free from my chest but with all of these things now taking place scars of my past still show on my face my load has been lightened but is not yet free wounds iv created still are killing me the light now shines as I thought it never would but things still killing like I don’t think they should they will never go away for they lives on in my mind still wishing so hard that id left them behinde but I cant ask for more, lord god iv gained all this Iv escaped all that life, a life I wont miss

10-09-2003, 11:00 PM	#2
JulieCitySlicker USER INFO » Status: Taken Higher Posts: 15,310 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	Very nice creedguy I liked it a lot:P __________________ Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot

11-02-2003, 01:23 AM	#5
Creed_Defaultgirl USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 903 Joined: Nov 2003 Currently: Offline	this is awesome, I really like! __________________ "...My beaten heart is in your hands, What I really need is shelter, And a chance to relearn love, Teach me all over, All over to relearn love, Show me again, So I can relearn love, The comfort of your arms around me, Your tender hands caress my head, I lay beside you, I'm not worthy..." Relearn Love~Scott Stapp

11-02-2003, 10:10 AM	#6
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Aint No future past in the past creedguy16....it was good well written.....your go boy........peace __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

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