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tru2mine · 03-10-2003, 03:44 PM

i wrote this about a year ago and for some reason i feel like sharing.

I stand alone
confined to this same old road
trapped in confusion
my mind dont wanna play, i fold
I feel im losin,
my grasp on realitys cold
desperation how do i crawl up out of this hole,
My life is fadin,
the path that i have walked is thin,
no room for error,
bad decisions have sparked my sin,
where do i go from here, im lost
theres nobody to help,
its me against the world fightin as im burning in hell,
or so it seems , is this dreams or is all of it real
watch me as i sleep, when i wake is all of it healed

There it is, let me know what ya think.

JulieCitySlicker · 03-10-2003, 03:59 PM

That was really good

I have felt the same feelings before. I really enjoyed reading your poem

tru2mine · 03-10-2003, 04:01 PM

thanx

JulieCitySlicker · 03-10-2003, 04:11 PM

Your Welcome:P

Siana · 03-11-2003, 04:55 AM

i like that poem

Ivan_Creed · 03-12-2003, 08:41 PM

Very interesting... there is truth in your poem!!

whitebird · 03-26-2003, 04:40 PM

It seems like this poem was written when there was great difficulty in your life. The darkness is expressed thru your words. Great sadness sometimes creates very spiritual and creative flows in our lives. Thank for sharing your poem.

03-10-2003, 03:44 PM	#1
tru2mine USER INFO » Status: Misconception Posts: 101 Joined: Dec 2002 Currently: Offline	-Confusion- i wrote this about a year ago and for some reason i feel like sharing. I stand alone confined to this same old road trapped in confusion my mind dont wanna play, i fold I feel im losin, my grasp on realitys cold desperation how do i crawl up out of this hole, My life is fadin, the path that i have walked is thin, no room for error, bad decisions have sparked my sin, where do i go from here, im lost theres nobody to help, its me against the world fightin as im burning in hell, or so it seems , is this dreams or is all of it real watch me as i sleep, when i wake is all of it healed There it is, let me know what ya think.

03-10-2003, 03:59 PM	#2
JulieCitySlicker USER INFO » Status: Taken Higher Posts: 15,310 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	That was really good I have felt the same feelings before. I really enjoyed reading your poem __________________ Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot

03-10-2003, 04:11 PM	#4
JulieCitySlicker USER INFO » Status: Taken Higher Posts: 15,310 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	Your Welcome:P __________________ Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot

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03-10-2003, 04:01 PM	#3
tru2mine USER INFO » Status: Misconception Posts: 101 Joined: Dec 2002 Currently: Offline	thanx

03-26-2003, 04:40 PM	#7
whitebird USER INFO » Status: Blue Collar Posts: 630 Joined: Feb 2003 Currently: Offline	It seems like this poem was written when there was great difficulty in your life. The darkness is expressed thru your words. Great sadness sometimes creates very spiritual and creative flows in our lives. Thank for sharing your poem.

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