A Poem of Mine

Tremontichik006 · 03-04-2003, 07:54 PM

I'm really shy, so i dont like to show my work that much. I write alot, and not just poems. I hope someday to publish a book... but... i dont know... so this is one of my poems i wrote for someone. I hope u guys all like it. Please dont laugh:embarass: i would love to hear some of ur opinions!

I had a dream that you were the one
but now i think that dream is done
yet our destiny is controlled by fate
your silent looks always make me feel so great
Its been awhile but i still think about you
Now i wonder, Do you still think about me too?
I wish i could run up to you, hug you,kiss you
The sad thing is... u dont even have a clue
My feelings for you have become so strong
I cannot believe they have lasted this long
What do you think? What do you say?
Should these feelings remain the same?

JulieCitySlicker · 03-04-2003, 08:05 PM

That was a cool poem

I really liked it very much:P

03-04-2003, 07:54 PM	#1
Tremontichik006 USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 817 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	A Poem of Mine I'm really shy, so i dont like to show my work that much. I write alot, and not just poems. I hope someday to publish a book... but... i dont know... so this is one of my poems i wrote for someone. I hope u guys all like it. Please dont laugh:embarass: i would love to hear some of ur opinions! I had a dream that you were the one but now i think that dream is done yet our destiny is controlled by fate your silent looks always make me feel so great Its been awhile but i still think about you Now i wonder, Do you still think about me too? I wish i could run up to you, hug you,kiss you The sad thing is... u dont even have a clue My feelings for you have become so strong I cannot believe they have lasted this long What do you think? What do you say? Should these feelings remain the same? __________________ The sun shines and I cant avoid the light I think Im holding on to life too tight Ashes to ashes and dust to dust Sometimes I feel like giving up yeah I said sometimes I feel like giving up

03-04-2003, 08:05 PM	#2
JulieCitySlicker USER INFO » Status: Taken Higher Posts: 15,310 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	That was a cool poem I really liked it very much:P __________________ Oh I'm a wandering soul I'm still walking the line that leads me home alone All I know I still got mountains to climb on my own Enough To Let Me Go-Switchfoot

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