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Old 02-23-2003, 12:39 PM   #1
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Poem

Just a poem for ya


Nowhere near right here


Focus drawn from what I thought I wanted
Secrets hidden in the shadows now confronted
Not knowing if I can confront them on my own
The thought that hurts the most is of being alone
But I know I’ve walked this far with no-one
And wont turn back because of an unknown horizon
For the mystery is what fuels the ambition to move on
The ambition that grows with time and makes you strong
But I wish the mystery would somewhat clear
And Id always know that someone would be with me here
An assurance that can never be there
I just wish I knew that someone cared
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To them Im seen as different but that I cant control
I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes
Refusing to see inside is something that they choose
And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse
For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose
Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take
Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone
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Old 02-23-2003, 12:40 PM   #2
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That is absolutely beautiful. You are VERY talented.
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Old 02-26-2003, 07:59 AM   #3
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agree
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Old 02-26-2003, 10:32 PM   #4
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That was SWEET!!!
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Old 02-27-2003, 03:37 PM   #5
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very nice
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Old 02-27-2003, 03:52 PM   #6
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You have good words too share... Do you have more poems?
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You now what
I don`t like you at all
You have nothing
And i have it all
I got nothing to share with you
Maybe a piece of paper
But what is that?
Maybe it defines you?
You are no one
Just be your self

"Complex!"
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