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Old 10-27-2007, 04:57 AM   #1
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Keeping it simple

Sometime today
I fell away
Swear I could feel you in the wind
Swear I could feel you in me

Closing my eyes
I realize
You may be gone
But it aint for long

Blowing my way
The sun starts to fade
But I know
Won't ever be alone

Grass between my toes
Air in which I breath
This love I feel
All thanks to you

The sun has set...oh
Catch my breath
Saying goodbye, for now
Is the best
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Old 10-27-2007, 08:58 AM   #2
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Re: Keeping it simple

very venting and reflecting and all that stuff
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Old 10-27-2007, 02:09 PM   #3
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Old 10-27-2007, 10:40 PM   #4
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Re: Keeping it simple

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well from the start to the ending all i can say it was very very very well written nothing not a thing was missing from that piece as HARDCORE as it was it ended real simple Ok just perfect
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Old 10-27-2007, 11:01 PM   #5
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thank u!
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Old 10-27-2007, 11:03 PM   #6
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Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) thank u!
yes i thought it could use good feed back..
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as do all good poems.
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Old 10-27-2007, 11:14 PM   #8
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Re: Keeping it simple

Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) as do all good poems.
yes indeed my point excaltey you,ve got some good potery going on worth elboarating
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Old 10-27-2007, 11:27 PM   #9
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heh, i would someday like to start a band. but i dunno if i sound good when i sing. i really just wan't to get these, "songs", out there. I call them songs, i write them with the music in mind.
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Old 10-27-2007, 11:44 PM   #10
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Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) heh, i would someday like to start a band. but i dunno if i sound good when i sing. i really just wan't to get these, "songs", out there. I call them songs, i write them with the music in mind.
thats the way i write to the music is always in the head always someday i may to haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa my friend its a big part of my life but not a lot of room for it if that makes any sense
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it makes perfect sense. i know exactly what you mean.
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Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) it makes perfect sense. i know exactly what you mean.
thanks for understanding man here latley i,ve been on a roll got it in my head have,nt a lot of time to even put stuff to paper
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Old 10-28-2007, 12:01 AM   #13
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hmmmm, try carrying around a small note pad. the size that fits in your pocket. so when somthing just comes to you, you can just quckly write it down and put it back in your pocket, to finish it later. just some advise - i do it.
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Old 10-28-2007, 09:30 AM   #14
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Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) hmmmm, try carrying around a small note pad. the size that fits in your pocket. so when somthing just comes to you, you can just quckly write it down and put it back in your pocket, to finish it later. just some advise - i do it.
i do but normally i have a complexty i have a tendies when i start something i just cant give 25 percent of it and get to the rest later i gotta give 100 percent all the time, the same thing when wrting down lyrics now if it real good oh you bet your fanny i,ll write it on my jeans if i have to haaaaaaa
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Old 10-28-2007, 04:00 PM   #15
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yes, i've experienced that to. maybe just try to clear your scheduel up a bit? that might help, if you can.
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