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10-05-2004, 11:37 PM | #1 |
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Telltale Heart
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An unforgiving heart Wrinkles like a prune As the heat of anger Sucks it dry… An unforgiving heart Does more damage With the truth Than could e’er be done with a lie… An unforgiving heart Believes it’s not alone Feels empty Never knowing why… An unforgiving heart That's lost it's way Must relearn How to fly… ©2004 Susan D. |
10-05-2004, 11:45 PM | #2 |
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sometimes when i read others poems it feels like you all write what im going through you spoke to my heart.
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10-06-2004, 01:27 AM | #3 |
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Unforgiven Heart Does More Dammage With The Truth Than Could,e,er Be Done With a Lie~~~
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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thanks y'all for reading it...part of the reason i write is with the hope that what i write stirs something within the reader that they can identify with personally...and make what they read their own...
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I Know Your Threads Rulesssssssssssssss , ROCK ON
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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