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Old 10-05-2004, 11:37 PM   #1
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Telltale Heart

Telltale Heart

An unforgiving heart
Wrinkles like a prune
As the heat of anger
Sucks it dry…
An unforgiving heart
Does more damage
With the truth
Than could e’er be done with a lie…

An unforgiving heart
Believes it’s not alone
Feels empty
Never knowing why…
An unforgiving heart
That's lost it's way
Must relearn
How to fly…

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Old 10-05-2004, 11:45 PM   #2
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sometimes when i read others poems it feels like you all write what im going through you spoke to my heart.
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Old 10-06-2004, 01:27 AM   #3
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Unforgiven Heart Does More Dammage With The Truth Than Could,e,er Be Done With a Lie~~~
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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thanks y'all for reading it...part of the reason i write is with the hope that what i write stirs something within the reader that they can identify with personally...and make what they read their own...
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Old 10-06-2004, 12:10 PM   #5
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Quote: (Originally Posted by Ann Allusion) thanks y'all for reading it...part of the reason i write is with the hope that what i write stirs something within the reader that they can identify with personally...and make what they read their own...
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