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01-08-2004, 10:11 AM | #1 |
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Burning illusions R&R
finally free of the world that I made
I can turn and see the place that I stayed it burns and crumbles and the smoke fills the sky I turn and stumble and begin to wonder why why did everything fall apart while I stood and I tried nothing at all whent right and my hope here has died shadows of the people I knew cry for me to stay but I know if I do I wont live one more day the flames burn away the illusions of who I thought they were they melt down the confusions and the visions are pure hate and lies spread through the masses while the little that I brought slowly passes staring in fear of the world I created flames dance in my eyes from a world I hated smoke fills my lungs and distorts what I say reality kills the hope and I bleed here today my world lays in dust and drifts with the wind the days slowly pass and someday ill meand |
01-08-2004, 02:26 PM | #2 |
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this Part Really Touches Me}}Why Did Everything Fall Apart While I Stood And I Tried And }Shadows Of the People I Knew Cry For Me To Stay....that was good in a sad kinda way
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01-08-2004, 05:21 PM | #3 |
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That's a terrific line...it paints a great picture in my mind...Great job, CreedGuy16!
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01-14-2004, 10:08 PM | #4 |
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Very good CreedGuy
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