The Serpent - Page 2

creedsister · 01-05-2004, 01:58 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by hide) You think you know me
I’m shackled
Oppressive mentor
Can’t hide
You cast your bloodstained web
I’m trapped
Self-serving master
Depletes me

Are you happy now
I’m gone
Relentless chase
Can’t win
You crush a willing soldier
I’m wounded
Black days and nights
Consume me

i really like these two verses another good job! Dark, Angry yet eloquent good stuff!

Check my Disease post about the DSL CD!

those are the verses i liked too hide}}great job Dogstar

SCOTTSMYMAN · 01-05-2004, 05:41 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by njcreedite) "Someday when you’re not looking
You’ll get what’s coming
Snake bit and unable to fight
You’ll wish you had done me right"

Can't you just hear James Hetfield (Metallica)
doing his trademark growl and evil laugh?

Way Cool Dogstar.

Actaully I'm getting another Maynard vibe of this one Kerri!( I maybe a little prejudice right now about him!

) It was great! Alot of aggression pouring through your verses.

Dogstar · 01-07-2004, 02:41 AM

LOL, well you can't go wrong with Maynard and Metallica!

. Thanks, you guys!

hide · 01-07-2004, 07:02 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) LOL, well you can't go wrong with Maynard and Metallica!

. Thanks, you guys!

dreaming here but how good would it be for Maynard to front Metallica? no disrespect to James Hetfield!

Dogstar · 01-07-2004, 08:18 PM

Funny you should mention that, hehehe. On one of the bootlegs of the current tour, APC does a little of Master of Puppets after the encore

...He had a pretty good growl, but for Metallica, I still would prefer James

.

njcreedite · 01-07-2004, 10:19 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by hide) dreaming here but how good would it be for Maynard to front Metallica? no disrespect to James Hetfield!

NO NO NO

....James must ALWAYS front Metallica.

hide · 01-07-2004, 11:32 PM

Quote: (Originally Posted by njcreedite) NO NO NO

....James must ALWAYS front Metallica.

yeah James does suit Metallica to a key but if Metallica ever does what The Doors did, I wouldn't mind seeing Maynard as one of the guys out front. Maynard doing Master of Puppets I must get this.

Dogstar · 01-07-2004, 11:34 PM

hide...you can download it from the following web site:
aperfectcircle.net. Click on tour journal and hit the link for the San Antonio show on 10/31/03. (I think it's that one, anyway, hehe) and it's the last track. I think it's labled freestyle jam or something. That place is a gold mine of for live shows.

01-05-2004, 01:58 PM	#16
creedsister USER INFO » Status: Tree of Wisdom Posts: 8,290 Joined: Oct 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by hide) You think you know me I’m shackled Oppressive mentor Can’t hide You cast your bloodstained web I’m trapped Self-serving master Depletes me Are you happy now I’m gone Relentless chase Can’t win You crush a willing soldier I’m wounded Black days and nights Consume me i really like these two verses another good job! Dark, Angry yet eloquent good stuff! Check my Disease post about the DSL CD! those are the verses i liked too hide}}great job Dogstar __________________ Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything

01-07-2004, 02:41 AM	#18
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	LOL, well you can't go wrong with Maynard and Metallica! . Thanks, you guys! __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

01-07-2004, 07:02 PM	#19
hide USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 919 Joined: Feb 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by Dogstar) LOL, well you can't go wrong with Maynard and Metallica! . Thanks, you guys! dreaming here but how good would it be for Maynard to front Metallica? no disrespect to James Hetfield! __________________ come on all you PJ loving Creeders come and look and also post at the busiest and funniest board around (excluding here of course LOL) http://forums.pearljam.com

01-07-2004, 08:18 PM	#20
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	Funny you should mention that, hehehe. On one of the bootlegs of the current tour, APC does a little of Master of Puppets after the encore ...He had a pretty good growl, but for Metallica, I still would prefer James . __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

01-07-2004, 10:19 PM	#21
njcreedite USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 808 Joined: Jan 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by hide) dreaming here but how good would it be for Maynard to front Metallica? no disrespect to James Hetfield! NO NO NO ....James must ALWAYS front Metallica. __________________ eddie vedder quote:: We were both singers. Chris Cornell The first time we played he came to this little club and he told me that it was really good and he was thankful that I was there and that I was who I was, or something really nice, but the whole time he was saying this, he didn't realize but he was standing under a black light, and his teeth were glowing and his eyes were glowing. I remember it as my first conversation with Satan ..."

01-07-2004, 11:32 PM	#22
hide USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 919 Joined: Feb 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: (Originally Posted by njcreedite) NO NO NO ....James must ALWAYS front Metallica. yeah James does suit Metallica to a key but if Metallica ever does what The Doors did, I wouldn't mind seeing Maynard as one of the guys out front. Maynard doing Master of Puppets I must get this. __________________ come on all you PJ loving Creeders come and look and also post at the busiest and funniest board around (excluding here of course LOL) http://forums.pearljam.com

01-07-2004, 11:34 PM	#23
Dogstar Forum Diplomat USER INFO » Status: Young Grown Old Posts: 21,345 Joined: Sep 2002 Currently: Offline	hide...you can download it from the following web site: aperfectcircle.net. Click on tour journal and hit the link for the San Antonio show on 10/31/03. (I think it's that one, anyway, hehe) and it's the last track. I think it's labled freestyle jam or something. That place is a gold mine of for live shows. __________________ Silly monkeys give them thumbs they make a club and beat their brother down. How they survive so misguided is a mystery.

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