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I’m spent Insatiable thirst Can’t quench You go to the well again I’m dry Bottomless desire Drains me Can’t feed your hunger I’m poor Bloated leeches Can’t shake You gloat high and mighty I’m low Corporate sword Strikes me Someday when you’re not looking You’ll get what’s coming Snake bit and unable to fight You’ll wish you had done me right You think you know me I’m shackled Oppressive mentor Can’t hide You cast your bloodstained web I’m trapped Self-serving master Depletes me Are you happy now I’m gone Relentless chase Can’t win You crush a willing soldier I’m wounded Black days and nights Consume me Someday when you’re not looking You’ll get what’s coming Snake bit and unable to fight You’ll wish you had done me right |
You think you know me
I’m shackled Oppressive mentor Can’t hide You cast your bloodstained web I’m trapped Self-serving master Depletes me Are you happy now I’m gone Relentless chase Can’t win You crush a willing soldier I’m wounded Black days and nights Consume me i really like these two verses another good job! Dark, Angry yet eloquent good stuff! Check my Disease post about the DSL CD! |
Thanks, hide... I've been a little ticked off at my boss of late :D...hehehe, better to express it this way than saying some things that could get me in trouble or fired, hehehe...
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[quote=Dogstar]Thanks, hide... I've been a little ticked off at my boss of late :D...hehehe, better to express it this way than saying some things that could get me in trouble or fired, hehehe...
Cool and yes that is a great idea i'm sure you like having gas and electricity! LOL That poem could equally apply to one of my housemates who to be nice isn't doing his fair share. |
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Hahahah, yeah, I'm liking my gas and electricity...too funny...That's so cool that it could apply to your housemate. I'm hoping my writing, though inspired by something specific, can apply to more than what I was thinking about. Does that make any sense, hehe? It's 4:10 a.m. and I'm surprised my brain cells are still functioning... |
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4:10 am? wo don't you have to work for that tyant tomorrow? LOL It's always good when someone can apply it to a different situation then what is was intended for. Strange how when you write something it is so clear to you but others can interept it to mean something different. |
Yeah, that's what I love about writing! I work nights anyway, hehehe, but I do have tomorrow and Tuesday off. Those are my regular days off...It's already Monday where you are, though, right? It's technically Monday a.m., but it's really not *tomorrow* until I've gone to bed :D. So in my mind, it's still Sunday night.
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you work nights how is it sleeping during the day? Its nearly 9:00 P:M Monday night here! |
I'm used to it. Never have been much of a morning person...I typically go to bed between 4 and 5 and get up between 11 a.m. and noon...
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I knew exactly what the source of this one was!! Great expression, Kerri!!!
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Awesome job, keep it up!
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Damn Girl, that's awesome! So when does band practice start???
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LMAO, Aimee, thanks!
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I figured you see right through that one, Teri :D...Yeah, I still want to eat, so better rant this way, LOL. Thanks much, Torn signs! |
"Someday when you’re not looking
You’ll get what’s coming Snake bit and unable to fight You’ll wish you had done me right" Can't you just hear James Hetfield (Metallica) doing his trademark growl and evil laugh? :D Way Cool Dogstar. |
Hehehehe, thanks, njcreedite!!!
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