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05-04-2004, 05:21 PM | #1 |
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Waterfall
Underneath a waterfall
Wash away the dirt and dust Of another wasted day Saddled on a carousel Drift away from the mind clutter Of another hazy day Can’t find the way To tell you why I can’t make it today Can’t find the way To tell you why I can’t shake it today Perched atop a snow-white cloud Far away from the killing field Of another blackened day Caught a wave on sea of green Float away from the devil’s pull Of another dying day Can’t find the way To tell you why I can’t make it today Can’t find the way To tell you why I can’t fake it today
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another great job i like the alternate chorus the best;
Can’t find the way To tell you why I can’t make it today Can’t find the way To tell you why I can’t fake it today |
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Thanks, hide! I love doing alternate chorus...I'm stealing from Jerry...he does it all the time . I love the little twist it can put in the lyrics.
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cool i steal all the time! OT but have you got Second Skin yet? |
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No, not yet...I have three things I want this week: Second Skin, The APC DVD single Lost in the Bermuda Triangle, and Zakk Wylde's Hangover Music CD...Must go shopping . I think I might have to order the Second Skin one online. We'll see...
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okay cool i must get the APC DVD as well, apart from that nothing i really want badly until Contraband that hits Aussie stores June 7th. I have to buy my mum a Human Nature CD (aussie boy band), i don't think my ego will allow me to put that cd on the counter. anyhow back to your poem...... |
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Hahahah, I hear that...It kills me to buy my mom stuff sometimes. Hehehe, she loves people like Celine Dion and Mariah Carey and Whitney Houston...UGH....
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It's got a nice shape.
Its good that U R checking out what your main influences are doing in their stuff, and you are applying it to your personal work. Cool.
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Thanks, Sincirr. Yeah, I always noticed that about Jerry's lyrics, how he'll just change a word or two in a verse or chorus, and it added so much with just that little adjustment.
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i just read those lines i liked those to, CANT FIND THE WAY TO TELL YOU I CANT FAKE IT TODAY, good job Dogstar i loved it,
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My life, in a nutshell. Great stuff, Kerri!!
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Thanks, you guys! Glad you enjoyed it.
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hehe well all three can sing but their songs are craptacular well maybe except for mariah's early stuff. my mum must be the world's biggest john farnham fan too. |
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Hahahah, my nephew uses that word, craptacular ...Cracks me up...yeah, their songs are sooo bad...and all that over-emoting. I can't deal. It hurts my ears.
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LOL it is a great word! their songs are crap but there are a couple of mariah songs where i'm left thinking wow that is some range she had. |
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