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Wind Song
Wind Song High on a hill The wind sang a song... Sung to the world About all that was wrong Sung to the world About all that was right The hymn lasted all day And into the nite... This song of life This song of love Fell on deaf ears Below and above... Still the world slept The sleep of the dead Missing the beauty In what the wind said... There were a few Whose hearts were alive That heard every word Upon which they thrived... When the sun rose Bringing promise of morning Those that believed Found it all quite transforming... They heard what was said And knew all along The truth they were seeking Was in the wind's song... ©2005 Susan D. |
i really liked it :) :rockon: it was an amazing writing it was written so well
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I agree it was written very well good job!
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thank you both for the comments...:rockon:
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Your Welcome I give It A 10 It Was Awsome :jam:
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