thats awsome my friend some melodys you can just hear changing its a must for some lyrics so we can feel theme .... Haaaaaaaaaaaaaa ;) Job Well Done

Really like these... ;)

lyrics, lyrics, lyrics....ok here is my poem Crack The Whip, I already posted it as a topic, but ah vell, I stole the last part from Creed, never really been good with endings so if you can think of an original one please tell me.... you can make this into a song or lyrics like all my poems so yeah...
Crack The Whip
Caught in the crossfire I struggle through
Frantic, faction, focus guides me too
Death so near everything goes black
Only a small light shines
The nightmare continues as we dodge bullets fired by our enemies
We can’t dodge them forever
Darkness envelops the week
The strong continue to seek
The hope, we search, we try, we cry
Wandering unknowingly through a maze
Our life clouded in a haze
Mist and sorrows
We struggle with the thoughts of peril and death
I walk down a dark alley
A streetlight miles away
Here the shadows conceal the terror
I walk slowly and somberly through
Sad eyes follow me
I don’t know what to do
There are always the questions
Yes the questions
What if?
What if I?
What if your words could be judged like a crime?

not a word metalenus or whatever you spell your name as, lol, I know already I stol frantic faction focus from say I, thankies for the information, lol

Ummm... dude you aren't supposed to post your song in another's thread. And you end the song with someone else lyrics... what on Earth...

not a dude...female...thankies :rolleyes: :rolleyes: :rolleyes:

yes sweetie i agree no ofense but you gotta got start your own thread before ya do that its ok though just remembear next time it makes me kinda dizzzzzzzzzy

oh sorry....ok then, but I already did, never mind :( :(

Its ok sweetie i left you comment over there its good stuff :jam: :jam: i screw up all the time and cause myself :o i will post something in the wrong thing like what time is right now in the music matters or vice versa

See?...give a title to your song, uncertain....

You come up with one :D

yes those are the lines i liked ;) except for the becoming a man part ;)
they tell no lies hide none ..behind their eyes :D

well...actually 'to let him become a man' is the part I like more...lol :D

Five weeks... :D

Thn that is it's name. I'd edit the title but I am not sure how. lol