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Ann Allusion
10-05-2004, 11:37 PM
Telltale Heart

An unforgiving heart
Wrinkles like a prune
As the heat of anger
Sucks it dry…
An unforgiving heart
Does more damage
With the truth
Than could e’er be done with a lie…

An unforgiving heart
Believes it’s not alone
Feels empty
Never knowing why…
An unforgiving heart
That's lost it's way
Must relearn
How to fly…

©2004
Susan D.

HR2004
10-05-2004, 11:45 PM
sometimes when i read others poems it feels like you all write what im going through you spoke to my heart.

creedsister
10-06-2004, 01:27 AM
Unforgiven Heart Does More Dammage With The Truth Than Could,e,er Be Done With a Lie~~~ :jam:

Ann Allusion
10-06-2004, 11:20 AM
thanks y'all for reading it...part of the reason i write is with the hope that what i write stirs something within the reader that they can identify with personally...and make what they read their own...:jam:

creedsister
10-06-2004, 12:10 PM
thanks y'all for reading it...part of the reason i write is with the hope that what i write stirs something within the reader that they can identify with personally...and make what they read their own...:jam:
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