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Dogstar
12-15-2003, 03:52 AM
Would that I had seen the signs
Of waning interest repeating lines
Didn’t care to look your way
Blind I turned so silent stayed

River of tears soaked you through
A callous heart revealed to you
Struck you down, breath it stole
Left you drained and turned you cold

Birthday passed a thoughtless gift
Given to mend a growing rift
Nonchalant she let you fall
Thunder clapping hit the wall

Medicated mind you craved
Fed desire long depraved
Self-inflicted wound you drew
Indifference wasn’t lost on you

Would that I had seen the signs
Of waning interest tired eyes
Didn’t care to look your way
Forever now am bound to pay

SCOTTSMYMAN
12-15-2003, 09:41 AM
:clap: :clap: AWESOME! I love it Kerri!

Aimee
12-15-2003, 12:42 PM
Yes, I can relate. That's my fave of yours so far.

creedsister
12-15-2003, 04:57 PM
Another good one Dogstar

Dogstar
12-15-2003, 09:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, you guys :)

TeriB19
12-15-2003, 09:07 PM
I agree, that's my favorite of yours. I can feel the pain completely.

MrSeeker
12-16-2003, 02:19 AM
:clap: very good!!!

Creed_Defaultgirl
12-16-2003, 09:03 PM
Emotions.....wow! That Was Great!

Dogstar
12-16-2003, 11:09 PM
Thanks!!!

Sheila63
12-20-2003, 06:38 PM
Great poem, Dogstar!!:clap: :clap:

JulieCitySlicker
12-20-2003, 10:53 PM
Awesome poem Kerri :D

cjme
12-20-2003, 11:05 PM
I'm a few days late but...WOW