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Sam16
02-23-2003, 12:39 PM
Just a poem for ya


Nowhere near right here


Focus drawn from what I thought I wanted
Secrets hidden in the shadows now confronted
Not knowing if I can confront them on my own
The thought that hurts the most is of being alone
But I know I’ve walked this far with no-one
And wont turn back because of an unknown horizon
For the mystery is what fuels the ambition to move on
The ambition that grows with time and makes you strong
But I wish the mystery would somewhat clear
And Id always know that someone would be with me here
An assurance that can never be there
I just wish I knew that someone cared

hotforscott
02-23-2003, 12:40 PM
That is absolutely beautiful. You are VERY talented.

Siana
02-26-2003, 07:59 AM
agree

Wylde-Tremonti
02-26-2003, 10:32 PM
That was SWEET!!!

CollectiveSoul
02-27-2003, 03:37 PM
very nice

creeder
02-27-2003, 03:52 PM
You have good words too share... Do you have more poems?