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Old 09-14-2005, 07:42 PM   #1
Ann Allusion
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The Bird

The Bird

In his hands he held the bird...
Fragile and trembling
Like a lovers heart
Compassion filled his own
For her bravery and courage
As she played her part
Of mother and protector...
His touch was gentle
As he spoke in whispers
Kind and true
She trusted him...
As she knew he knew
What to do...
His lips touched her head
Like a brath of wind
As he felt her softness against his cheek
Closing his eyes, he worked his magic...
Then set her free again

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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 09-15-2005, 12:43 AM   #2
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speachless Amazing Im Lost For Words it was beautiful Like A missing Link To A Dream Where Everything that i thought i would miss so much was left that i never thought i knew Yes And I Really Liked This Line Filled His Own For Her Bravery And Courage As She Played Her Part Of A Mother And A Proctector Beautiful like the beauty in bloom I Really Really Liked It Ann
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 09-15-2005, 12:25 PM   #3
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thank you...i'm glad you enjoyed it and it "spoke" to you, cs...((hug))...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 09-16-2005, 10:07 AM   #4
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Your Welcome Ann Da {{Hug}}
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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