1st CATCHY song I've written!!!!

Wylde-Tremonti · 08-29-2003, 10:51 PM

This song is yet to be titled...i just wrote it on my acoustic....it's the 1st song that the guitar and lyrics have really come together to form a nice melody.... here's the lyrics....pretty simple..

[refrain]
Sittin all alone
Sittin by the phone
wonderin where you are
i know you're not far
-----------------
Where did you go?
I need to know
wonderin where you are
Cuz I'm Searchin for you heart

[palm muted chord interlude]
Cuz I'm searchin for you heart

[Refrain-just chords]

Refrain

I'm sittin here
I'm sittin here
but your not here
[chord outro]

ZION1010 · 08-30-2003, 12:06 AM

Its Cool Be Better if I could Hear it......how about sittin hear for a tiltle that is if you thought of abetter one>>you know what i hate when song gets A title And its not in the lyrics that sucks thats just......my opinon.....this place got a lot of theme here......id like to post a thread in every forum.......when i want your opinon I will be glad to give it to ya ......GOD BLESS GOOD LUCK WITH A TITLE

katzthatsme · 09-01-2003, 09:15 AM

i know where u got thaat first part lol

ZION1010 · 09-01-2003, 11:34 AM

Quote: Originally posted by katzthatsme
i know where u got thaat first part lol

Where?

DangerousDan85 · 09-01-2003, 08:31 PM

Creed- Inside Us All

"When I'm all alone
And no one else is there
Waiting by the phone"

ZION1010 · 09-01-2003, 09:59 PM

Wylde-Tremonti · 09-02-2003, 11:03 PM

hmmmm....that wasn't a consious thing...LOL....I REALLY DO HAVE CREED ON THE BRAIN...at least my sub-consious!!!

ZION1010 · 09-02-2003, 11:06 PM

Ya know When I First Read It It didnt Hit me

DangerousDan85 · 09-02-2003, 11:22 PM

Quote: Originally posted by TremontiWanaB
hmmmm....that wasn't a consious thing...LOL....I REALLY DO HAVE CREED ON THE BRAIN...at least my sub-consious!!!

yeah that reminds me, yesterday i was playing a riff that i thought i made up, but then i kept playing it and it sound familiar, and then i realized, it was from "Ice Ice Baby" which was from the bass line of "Under Pressure" a song by David Bowie and Freddy Mercury.

i mean it wasn't exactly the same, but it was pretty strange

ZION1010 · 09-02-2003, 11:46 PM

I Hated that Song Just As Bad As I Hated That whole year.....Word To ya mutha

DangerousDan85 · 09-03-2003, 12:50 AM

what year was that

ZION1010 · 09-03-2003, 12:37 PM

Torn Signs · 09-06-2003, 12:51 AM

ZION1010 · 09-06-2003, 12:55 AM

The Year Ice Ice baby Was in Your face ......DD,,,,There said It Sound It like what he was Playing And he Ask What Year the Song Came out Nothing deep

Torn Signs · 09-06-2003, 01:01 AM

08-29-2003, 10:51 PM	#1
Wylde-Tremonti USER INFO » Status: Said Eyes Posts: 4,357 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	1st CATCHY song I've written!!!! This song is yet to be titled...i just wrote it on my acoustic....it's the 1st song that the guitar and lyrics have really come together to form a nice melody.... here's the lyrics....pretty simple.. [refrain] Sittin all alone Sittin by the phone wonderin where you are i know you're not far ----------------- Where did you go? I need to know wonderin where you are Cuz I'm Searchin for you heart [palm muted chord interlude] Cuz I'm searchin for you heart [Refrain-just chords] Refrain I'm sittin here I'm sittin here but your not here [chord outro] __________________ NOT OF THIS WORLD "See to it that no-one takes you captive through hollow and deceptive philosophy, which depends on human tradition and the basic principles of this world rather than on Christ." Colossians 2:8 My Solo Project's Myspace: Tongues Of Fire Jesus + Guitars = Life

09-01-2003, 09:59 PM	#6
ZION1010 USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 976 Joined: Jul 2003 Currently: Offline	Okay

09-02-2003, 11:03 PM	#7
Wylde-Tremonti USER INFO » Status: Said Eyes Posts: 4,357 Joined: Oct 2002 Currently: Offline	hmmmm....that wasn't a consious thing...LOL....I REALLY DO HAVE CREED ON THE BRAIN...at least my sub-consious!!! __________________ NOT OF THIS WORLD "See to it that no-one takes you captive through hollow and deceptive philosophy, which depends on human tradition and the basic principles of this world rather than on Christ." Colossians 2:8 My Solo Project's Myspace: Tongues Of Fire Jesus + Guitars = Life

09-03-2003, 12:37 PM	#12
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08-30-2003, 12:06 AM	#2
ZION1010 USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 976 Joined: Jul 2003 Currently: Offline	Its Cool Be Better if I could Hear it......how about sittin hear for a tiltle that is if you thought of abetter one>>you know what i hate when song gets A title And its not in the lyrics that sucks thats just......my opinon.....this place got a lot of theme here......id like to post a thread in every forum.......when i want your opinon I will be glad to give it to ya ......GOD BLESS GOOD LUCK WITH A TITLE

09-01-2003, 11:34 AM	#4
ZION1010 USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 976 Joined: Jul 2003 Currently: Offline	Quote: Originally posted by katzthatsme i know where u got thaat first part lol Where?

09-02-2003, 11:06 PM	#8
ZION1010 USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 976 Joined: Jul 2003 Currently: Offline	Ya know When I First Read It It didnt Hit me

09-02-2003, 11:46 PM	#10
ZION1010 USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 976 Joined: Jul 2003 Currently: Offline	I Hated that Song Just As Bad As I Hated That whole year.....Word To ya mutha

09-06-2003, 12:55 AM	#14
ZION1010 USER INFO » Status: INK'ed Posts: 976 Joined: Jul 2003 Currently: Offline	The Year Ice Ice baby Was in Your face ......DD,,,,There said It Sound It like what he was Playing And he Ask What Year the Song Came out Nothing deep

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