lyrics for a song I wrote

[adparaiki]

I'm Adam, 23, I am a singer and guitarist in a band. Plz tell me what you think of the lyircs to this song so far. it's called room to breathe

Verse 1 -
Your eyes follow me,
Please let me be I can't breathe
You're watching at my every move
Smothering me,
Judging watching waiting ready to control
Do you think i've no mind of my own

Chorus-
You need to let me go,
because I need room to breathe
And i'll make up my own mind
I'll make my own wrongs and wrights

Bridge -
All I ever wanted is you to believe me,
I need room to breathe (x2)

[TrulyAmazing]

hey man i did,nt read, this piece, i like it, sorta got a dark groove to, reminds, me of the polices, that big 80,s hit from cats eyes, where they gave the chick shock thearpy to quit smoking, every breathe you take....

[adparaiki]

Quote: (Originally Posted by TrulyAmazing)

hey man i did,nt read, this piece, i like it, sorta got a dark groove to, reminds, me of the polices, that big 80,s hit from cats eyes, where they gave the chick shock thearpy to quit smoking, every breathe you take....

kwl thanks for your comments. I have recorded a live version of the song.
here: http://www.totallyunsigned.co.uk/members/1902/index.php
it's the second song down

[TrulyAmazing]

Quote: (Originally Posted by adparaiki)

kwl thanks for your comments. I have recorded a live version of the song.
here: http://www.totallyunsigned.co.uk/members/1902/index.php
it's the second song down

k.......