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Old 03-04-2004, 10:33 AM   #1
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Twist the Knife

By: Amy Aumick 2004

A lover's pain inside of me
A stinging gash I cannot see
Touch me there
Burn me
Twist the knife
Make me bleed

Rise above you, take you in
Laughing wildly as I sin
Scratch me here
I'm in
Twist the knife
Make it spin

Meet you, leave you, doesn't take long
Bind me, tie me, sing me your songs
But I swear
It's wrong
Twist the knife
We go on

You will love me, I will hate you
See it written above, it's true
It's not fair
Push through
Twist the knife
Kill my youth

You taste it in your dreamless sleep
My salty blood within will seep
Leave me dear
Don't weep
Twist the knife
Cut me deep
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Old 03-04-2004, 01:20 PM   #2
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That was awesome!
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Old 03-04-2004, 02:28 PM   #3
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hey girl that was some deep stuff. it puts me in mind of a hopless relationship. that at one time i was inn...Twist the knife kill my youth. WOW. Man that hits home with me. its like somebody feeding off your blood. hopes dreams And spirt....oh i dont want to get on a roll hey girl YOU ROCK!!!
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Old 03-04-2004, 04:00 PM   #4
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Quote: (Originally Posted by creedsister) hey girl that was some deep stuff. it puts me in mind of a hopless relationship. that at one time i was inn...Twist the knife kill my youth. WOW. Man that hits home with me. its like somebody feeding off your blood. hopes dreams And spirt....oh i dont want to get on a roll hey girl YOU ROCK!!!

Hopeless relationships...my forte! Thanks...
Mr. Seeker, I thought you'd like it
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Old 03-04-2004, 04:02 PM   #5
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It definitely captures many many feelings, Amy!! Great work!
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Old 03-04-2004, 04:22 PM   #6
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AWESOME!!! I loved it Amy and feel I can relate to alot of what you were saying.

Quote: You will love me, I will hate you
See it written above, it's true
It's not fair
Push through
Twist the knife
Kill my youth

that's my favorite part!
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Old 03-04-2004, 10:24 PM   #7
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Very good! I liked it a lot Aimee
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Old 03-07-2004, 12:15 AM   #8
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Man, that rocked, Aimee.

This verse rules!

You taste it in your dreamless sleep
My salty blood within will seep
Leave me dear
Don't weep
Twist the knife
Cut me deep
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Old 03-08-2004, 09:22 AM   #9
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Thank you very much!!! I like it when y'all pinpoint your favorite parts. It's neat to see where each person stands.
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