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04-13-2005, 02:21 PM
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Stress building...
My world crumbling... All the walls tumbling... I'm confused... Somewhat amused... Metally abused... Always subdued... Losing self esteem... Having no more control... All of it stole... Stomach churning... Heart aching... No more escaping... Im through playing... Always taking... Everyone faking... Head banging... Sick of this... No more test... Games put to rest... I tried my best... I get depressed... Through with my quest... Starting over no time... Too late to try... No one to confide... Running a race I cannot win... Singing a song I cant carry the tune too... Dancing to a rythm thats no heard... Finished all the while... No more... No more...
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Dancing around... With joy found... The music in my head loud... Joyful noises sound... Happiness surrounds... Last edited by HR2004 : 04-13-2005 at 05:00 PM. |
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04-13-2005, 07:37 PM
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Awesome job, HR2004. Full of feeling. I got nervous knots reading it
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04-14-2005, 12:16 AM
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Yes Indeed Had A Lot Gut And Pulse Rhythm To It And Head Banging Feel
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04-14-2005, 02:03 PM
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thank you both alot!!
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