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02-03-2004, 04:16 AM | #1 |
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Broken Love Song
"Theres somthing thats been weighing on my mind
I cant help, but think of you all the time I wish I could say I love you But thats somthing I know I cant do Im trying to contain these feelings inside,Im trying to be tame Because I know if I say those words,you wont feel the same That just brings the pain Im hurting inside, Im torn in two Over the fact that I cant be with you I hate this pain I feel,it makes me want to die Instead I'll just lay on the floor and cry I hate the way I feel when Im with you Because I know that you dont feel it too I hate the way we talk all the time Because I know that you will never be mine I hate the way I cry myself to sleep at night Because I know that you dont feel alright That just brings the pain Im hurting inside, Im torn in two Over the fact that I cant be with you I hate this pain I feel inside I what to kill myself because I already feel I died" Thats a bit out of my element,but do you like it?
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02-03-2004, 12:25 PM | #2 |
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Hey seeks its a keeper my brother~`000
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It's cool, as you said a little outta the rhythm, but alright.
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02-04-2004, 07:54 PM | #4 |
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Thanks. Im trying to go out of my element more so I can write any type of song. I need more practice though,hehe.
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