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08-14-2004, 11:33 PM
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A famous Kevin poem, it sucks as usual!
I see your body, lifeless
Hanging before me Knife in hand Throat spewing crimson Blood running from mouth Into your heart Looking into your eyes I see no life inside But tears chased by pain Prying open your body To reveal a broken heart Beauty in its purest form Soul escaping from body I am in awe as you leave I watch you fly to Heaven And then plunge into Hell Don't worry, my darling My tears will drown out the sorrow.
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08-15-2004, 11:31 AM
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Hey sucks as usual!!!!!!!! i know u did,nt give this one a title so i didnt have anything better todo si i gave it one for ya!!!!! Throat Spewing Crimson Blood Running From Mouth in to your heart !!!! Awsome Line That Line is what inspired the Title
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything 
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08-15-2004, 07:15 PM
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WOW, that is some heavy visual stuff! Great job!
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Thanks much, hehehe... Just me messing around as usual. I've been writing a lot again and I got more up beat stuff then what I usually write. I'm sure all of you will enjoy it, atleast i hope. Me and Kim wrote one,but I dont know if I should post it because its up to her so maybe you guys will see it,maybe not. Welp, Im off. Much love
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I'm with Kerri on that wow
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Thanks Julie
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