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Old 07-21-2003, 12:25 AM   #1
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ANOTHER PART OF ME (a poem)

Blades of grass
taller than I
as I scramble
through life's
twisting vines.

I witness
no signs
of other life.

I see
no semblance
of light.

I hear
no voice's
sound
other than
my own.

As I near
the edge
of this field
of grass,
I envision myself
emerging,
triumphantly,
through.

I reach out
and grasp
a small essence
of who
I once was.

I am ready
to shed
the empty shell
where my soul
resides.

Within, I know
some day,
I will discover
another part of me
to make my soul
complete.


©2003 L. A.
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Old 07-21-2003, 12:31 AM   #2
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Hey guys,

I wrote another poem!

Please feel free to drop a note if you wish!!

All my best to everyone!!

Thanks for reading!!

~Honey~
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Old 07-22-2003, 08:22 PM   #3
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I love your poem Honey. I could really feel the emotion in it. Very touching and emotional. I really really like it.
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Old 07-23-2003, 11:03 PM   #4
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simply awesome!!
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Someone finds salvation
In everyone
Another only pain
Someone tries to hide himself
Down inside himself he prays
Someone swears his true love
Until the end of time
Another runs away
Separate or united
Empty or insane
And be yourself is all that you can do
All that you can do

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Old 07-23-2003, 11:04 PM   #5
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Hello ScottsMyMan,

Your warm and kind sentiments bring a smile to my heart!

Thank you for leaving a note.

My best to you!!

~Honey~
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Old 07-23-2003, 11:07 PM   #6
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Hey goddess,

I am so happy you liked this one!! :dancing

Thanks so much for writing!!

All my best to you!!

~Honey~
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Old 07-25-2003, 04:10 PM   #7
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Honey, I loved this poem too. I especially love the following part -

As I near
the edge
of this field
of grass,
I envision myself
emerging,
triumphantly,
through.

I reach out
and grasp
a small essence
of who
I once was.

I am ready
to shed
the empty shell
where my soul
resides.

Within, I know
some day,
I will discover
another part of me
to make my soul
complete.

I can really relate to the feeling in those verses. Great work!!
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Old 07-25-2003, 09:38 PM   #8
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Hey Sheila,

I am so elated you liked this one too!!

Those verses are special to me as well. They help to remind me to keep striving for my goals, to never let go of my faith and to always believe in myself.

I am glad these verses touched you in some way.

I am very appreciative for the read and encouragement. Thanks!!

Peace to you!!

~Honey~
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Old 07-26-2003, 03:35 PM   #9
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You're welcome.
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