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Old 05-18-2003, 10:28 PM   #1
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Here ya go Goddes

A kinda happy one for you

Reusing Regret

This life I call mine I refuse to except
But how long can I Refuse before I regret
Ill take what I get and become stronger throughout
There is so much pain so why add doubt
Iv been blest inside so why ask for more
Ill just roll with the tide and see what’s in store
He would tell us the same so Ill follow his call
We can do nothing but try no matter how we fall
Life isn’t long so just take what you get
Cause how long can you refuse before you regret
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To them Im seen as different but that I cant control
I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes
Refusing to see inside is something that they choose
And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse
For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose
Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take
Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone
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Old 05-19-2003, 10:31 AM   #2
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nice one
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Old 05-19-2003, 12:34 PM   #3
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I love it Sam...
"we can do nothing but try no matter how we fall"--so true...
"cause how long can you refuse before you regret"--this speaks volumes and is my favorite line..
--very impressed...want more... Thank You for sharing...
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Old 05-19-2003, 04:12 PM   #4
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yeah,post more poems if u have
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Old 05-19-2003, 05:02 PM   #5
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That is a very good poem Sam16 It has a lot of true meaning in it and I really loved it
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Old 05-19-2003, 08:09 PM   #6
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Since we last talked about happy poems I was inspired to write a silly happy poem..tell what you think Sam, please...

A happy poem,
Who would of known,
One could come out of me,
This is crazy!
I am finding,
The sun is shinning,
Today is a beautiful day!
I just need to say-
I'm happy!
Going to try to not be too sappy,
Just want to shout--
Let it all OUT!!
Ready for anything,
Where to begin?
Had a few doubts..
That this would come out,
I wrote a happy poem!!!

:lol::lol::lol:
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In everyone
Another only pain
Someone tries to hide himself
Down inside himself he prays
Someone swears his true love
Until the end of time
Another runs away
Separate or united
Empty or insane
And be yourself is all that you can do
All that you can do

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Old 05-19-2003, 11:39 PM   #7
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ha! thats great goddes! I hate to say it but that one isnt all that happy and it was very hard to wright!!! anyway we may see one or two more in the futer.....maybe.
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"althought the names change inside we are all the same, why cant we tare down the walls and show the scar's were covering?"-Inside us All

My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If

To them Im seen as different but that I cant control
I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes
Refusing to see inside is something that they choose
And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse
For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose
Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take
Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone
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Old 05-20-2003, 12:48 PM   #8
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Sam, Sam, Sam..what am I going to do with you...maybe, huh?? Hey I still post even when nobody reads um...you can be brave too...
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In everyone
Another only pain
Someone tries to hide himself
Down inside himself he prays
Someone swears his true love
Until the end of time
Another runs away
Separate or united
Empty or insane
And be yourself is all that you can do
All that you can do

Be Yourself~Audioslave

~Ignore me, I dare you~
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