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Hey, I thought you guys might like this.
p.s. tell me what you think bad or good Now Strong A smile not felt I grudgingly call mine Putting on my show just wasting some time Walking my road but the ambition is gone Fooling myself but they know Im not strong Falling at first but now Iv moved on You have gotten your own way far to long But in your words your heart becomes weak You have mistakenly declared the wrong person weak You should have known who you put down For the oppressed are many and we will stand our ground But when the power is mine Ill turn it away I wont allow what you have created to last another day
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"althought the names change inside we are all the same, why cant we tare down the walls and show the scar's were covering?"-Inside us All My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If To them Im seen as different but that I cant control I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes Refusing to see inside is something that they choose And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone |
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05-16-2003, 05:36 PM
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I like it...is this person still in your life?? The one in the poem??
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Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~ 
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05-16-2003, 05:40 PM
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Yeah, its not a great poem but I wrote it in about 5 minuets on the way back from Colorado. She just finds it funny to beat me down I guess
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"althought the names change inside we are all the same, why cant we tare down the walls and show the scar's were covering?"-Inside us All My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If To them Im seen as different but that I cant control I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes Refusing to see inside is something that they choose And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone |
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05-16-2003, 05:52 PM
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Hey I live in Colorado...and relationships are hard..but it gives us writers something to write about...it's like our fuel...
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Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~
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05-16-2003, 07:31 PM
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Yeah, and in the end it makes you stronger I guess, you just gotta keep your head up and look for the bright side
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"althought the names change inside we are all the same, why cant we tare down the walls and show the scar's were covering?"-Inside us All My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If To them Im seen as different but that I cant control I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes Refusing to see inside is something that they choose And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone |
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05-16-2003, 11:04 PM
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And write...personally it's what keeps me sane. Alot of stuff I write is rather dark and what is ironic is that I do not look like a dark depressed person...I am actually usually quite happy...
--what about you why do you write??
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Same reason, It helps to get it out in the open I think so if Im going through hard times or something I wright about it and same way if Im happy soemtimes, make sense?
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"althought the names change inside we are all the same, why cant we tare down the walls and show the scar's were covering?"-Inside us All My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If To them Im seen as different but that I cant control I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes Refusing to see inside is something that they choose And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone |
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05-17-2003, 01:15 PM
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Do you have any happy poems?? I can't write happy stuff..I've tried...well I've written a few but I wouldn't call them happy more like they are just not as dark..for instance..
Everything is going to be okay somehow, someway We all are okay come what may There is always another day just remember what I say Everything is going to be okay ***silly short and stupid but it made me feel better know what I mean??**
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Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~
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No thats a great poem. And yeah I think I have at least two, Ill dig em out and maybe youll see em soon.
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"althought the names change inside we are all the same, why cant we tare down the walls and show the scar's were covering?"-Inside us All My stage is shared by many millions who lift there hands up high because they feel this, we are one we are strong, the more you hold us down the more we press on!- What If To them Im seen as different but that I cant control I know they couldn’t walk one step in my shoes Refusing to see inside is something that they choose And giving in to their hatred is something I refuse For the moment I give in is the moment that I lose Loosing is a risk that I just cannot take Cause if I loose it’s my heart that will brake- Falling Alone |
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05-17-2003, 10:11 PM
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okay waiting....lol.
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Someone finds salvation In everyone Another only pain Someone tries to hide himself Down inside himself he prays Someone swears his true love Until the end of time Another runs away Separate or united Empty or insane And be yourself is all that you can do All that you can do Be Yourself~Audioslave ~Ignore me, I dare you~
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