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Angush of the Inner Demon
This was written by me and Kim (Torn Signs)
"The crescent moon a pale amber, The night air so quiet and cold I quaver reminiscing the past as I try to comprehend what has happened. To the part of me that was so bold My inner core that could face the lies and the deception, Of all that I try so hard to hide, It is released when my control is debilitated, when my expectations cower before my emotions Im overwelmed because everyone will know I lied, The will know once my fist places itself in the other soul's chest, This reminscince gives no rest The agony of which I now feel, is as if my skin was to peel I will make that soul pay every day for taking all my liberty and justice away I will curse this anguish for all the days, for my sorrow will surely be taken away one day, The relevance of the situation matters not, as I'm not a ransacked cot The fact that I cant hide anymore is more then I can take, This moments thats been building up is going to have me break, All the faith I had in becoming somebody rushes away with the Black Sea, I now only look at the other soul with a maniac glee, All the panic in the creature will cause it to a flee, But this isn't just some sort of mad entity, this is my inner demon." Edit: The good parts are done by Kim.
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wow guys that was great it was about time kev you and kim wrote something togethear dont ya think!!!!hehe
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Hahaha,on behalf of me and Kim,thanks!
Im sure Kim will post too,but Im just thanking you on her behalf right now
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Oh! Ta,would you like to join my newsletter?
just give me your email and I'll add ya
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lol, funny, yeah right. You did better then me on this. 
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Kim,
What are you nuts!?!?! no way! You were way better then me!!!
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Wow, very cool collaboration.
Love this one: The fact that I cant hide anymore is more then I can take, This moments thats been building up is going to have me break
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Thanks
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