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06-09-2003, 03:45 PM | #1 |
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New Freedom Fighter verse
Hey, one of my favorite Creed songs is "Freedom Fighter." The only problem is I feel it is way too short (it's like half as long as the average Creed song!). You might think I'm nerdy, but I kinda gradually thought up a new verse to throw in there, right after the first chorus and before the "can't you hear us coming?" bridge. Here goes (don't laugh at me!!! )
"This life's so full of change, All that's constant is the love That comes from you, here in my arms; It comes from up above. (But) the wicked of this world They would take that love away. That's the reason I am Freedom Fighting every day." Maybe slap another chorus here, then go into the bridge... I think it kinda works.... any thoughts?
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06-09-2003, 11:39 PM | #2 |
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thats very good Mysacrifice, i really like it
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06-10-2003, 09:37 AM | #3 |
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Awww yeah! Freedom Fighting every day!!! I'm feelin' it, mysacrifice411!!!
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06-10-2003, 01:27 PM | #4 |
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I like it to
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06-18-2003, 09:10 PM | #5 |
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Very cool. I love it.
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06-21-2003, 10:05 PM | #6 |
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Not too bad an addition. Submit it to the band, and maybe they'll add it.
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tru tru
its pretty kool aye goin along wif da tune wen i red it sweet as!!!
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pretty cool...goes along well with the tune
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