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11-30-2004, 03:23 PM | #1 |
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Wishes
This is a song im working on, opinions would b great. thanks!
I wish you’d never known me I wish id never knew The times we shared were only Our own points of view Cuz you never needed me And I always wanted you Now the only thing to do Is turn and walk away (And it is killing me!) Turn and walk away from me Burn away the thoughts of me But leave me the remains The parts you didn’t like And ill wash away the stains Ill make me whole again But until then I wish you’d never known me I wish id never knew The times we shared were only Our own points of view Cuz you never needed me And I always wanted you Now the only thing to do Is turn and walk away (And it is killing me!) You had no use for the truth And I would not stand to lose You had to choose And you showed me Who will really lose And I, oh I I wish you’d never known me I wish id never knew The times we shared were only Our own points of view Cuz you never needed me And I always wanted you Now the only thing to do Is turn and walk away (And it is killing me!) |
11-30-2004, 08:36 PM | #2 |
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Good One, sometimes it feels like that, in stuff ROCK ON
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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that was good!
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12-01-2004, 07:14 PM | #4 |
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will make a good song...
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