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11-06-2002, 12:21 AM
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"So Together" a song
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V1. I've been sitting here thinking Of all that you said, And everything about you That now is dead To me... How can a love like ours Be broken apart I sit and count the hours That we're apart Wandering if I should Have a change of heart Ch1. You and me We were so together All the times that we Shared All the pains that we Bared But it took a little thing, To tear me from you, The pain it brings Is to much to bare I've tried to find reason, Do I just not care V2. I've lyed awake many nights Trying to figure out why I said good-bye, You were everything I wanted And now I can't hold you tonight Because of my jealous pride I've sat and hated myself over again For all that has happened since then And I can't stand this constant pain That burns me on the inside, And I realize You were the brightest Star in the sky And now I say good-bye to that pride Repeat Ch1. ©Copyright 2001 Gary Plemons All rights reservered
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11-12-2002, 07:57 AM
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it's nice
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11-16-2002, 01:46 AM
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How long does it take you to think up of these songs? There are all really good! Wish I could write like that!
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It usually takes me around an hr to 2hrs to think one up, but this particular one, I thought up the chorus and the rest came to me like that, so i'd say my shortest time would be around half and hour.
than you for your comments
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You're welcome.....keep up the good work, you are an excellent writer!
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agree
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