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07-18-2004, 03:17 PM | #1 |
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Kill the Lights
There’s a sickness hanging over me
Circling like a starving vulture Watching for the bits and pieces Of everything that made me whole There’s a darkness overtaking me Lurking like a bloated spider Thirsting for the blood and sweat Of everything that fucker stole Kill the lights, close my eyes To the bitter taste that I despise Kill the lights, close my eyes To the open sores that burn inside A hollow veneer clouds the reflection Fading like the fog in a dream Stealing from the silver chalice Everything that I rendered dear The cracked hand of fate slithers toward me Creeping like a sea of lava Consuming all of the memories Of everything that fed my fear Kill the lights, close my eyes To the piercing pain that thrives inside Kill the lights, close my eyes To the silent cries that I deny
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Im speachless Thirsting For The Blood And Sweat Of Everything The F$*# Stole Couldnt have said it better myself
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Thanks, creedsister!
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Yeeeouch!...that sucker stings like rubbing salt into the wounds...
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Heh, sorry 'bout that, Ann .
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I found it Strong It made me feel better
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Wow, thanks, creedsister! That's pretty cool. You know, I was kind of uptight when I was writing it, but I felt better, too, after I was done with it .
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Cool
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