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12-11-2003, 08:34 AM | #1 |
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Come Together
Come Together
Come together in the midnight sun, come together for we are one. Bound in love we press are faces, bound in love we've left the traces. For tommorow there is no hurry, in after glow the time is now. we sleep somehow,only God knows what we lack, only God can hold us back. Diane F
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12-11-2003, 09:57 AM | #2 |
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That one,may have been,short,but very deep,i really like the last line only god can hold us back,,good one
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Nice poem! Sometimes the shorter ones say it all!!
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thats so true,,,
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12-13-2003, 11:46 PM | #5 |
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Yup, sometimes long ones just get boring! I've got this big poetry book and sometimes I catch myself thinking, when is this gonna end?! If it's got enough emotions, and the writer keeps it exciting, I like it! As for this poem, IT'S GREAT! Luv it!
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Short and to the point. I like it!!
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06-08-2004, 01:40 PM | #7 |
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HaHa Im Still Down With That One
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything |
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Great. I love the boldness in it and the power.
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Re: Come Together
wow i can't believe this site is still here and i actually remembered my password.and all my old post are here still.awsome
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Yep AND STILL HOLDING TO THE ONE THAT KNOWS GLORYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY great to see ya old girl its fun to revisted potery
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great to see ya old girl -am definetly that lol but won't we all be one day. hugs to you too.have a good evening.
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AMEN Choose this day who ye shall serve RICH OUT AND GRAB just has hard now as it will be then I ASURE YA thanks you
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