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Old 05-29-2003, 04:38 PM   #1
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Feedback?

Hey everyone, I've been checking out this board and you all seem like really supportive people and obviously fellow creed fans. If you get a chance, I'd love to get some feedback on my band's website, lyrics, songs, etc. Something to do if you're bored anyway. The recordings are from a live show, so take the quality for what it is, but it's pretty good all things considered. Thanks guys

www.PensiveState.com

or you can stream a song at www.mp3.com/PensiveStateFan
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Old 05-29-2003, 04:57 PM   #2
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hey, you guys sound really good! I like the lyrics and the website is cool. Keep it up and you'll have an upcomong fan right here!
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Old 05-29-2003, 05:50 PM   #3
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I liked you site. Some of your lyrics were really good. Keep it up you guys sound great!!
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Old 05-29-2003, 05:50 PM   #4
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Awesome, thanks for the compliments and for checking us out. Keep checking the site for updates periodically and thanks again! Good karma!
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Old 05-29-2003, 06:40 PM   #5
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Hi Jake!
You guys sound really great and you have a cool site to! Good luck to you and your band:P Thanks for sharing your site with us and welcome to the board
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Old 05-29-2003, 06:48 PM   #6
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awwwwww that's so sweet. Thanks
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Old 05-29-2003, 06:49 PM   #7
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Your very welcome
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Old 05-30-2003, 01:11 PM   #8
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Hey Jake
You should go to Creative Corner there is actually some of us writers here...feel free to post, we are usually pretty gentle..:lol:

I will go look at your site later sorry got class, WELCOME
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Wow!!! I read your lyrics and am very impressed...they are all really good..my favorite was out of "Never Let Go"--

"No more flirting, no more reason to try"
"You just don't want me, now I'm wondering why"

that is such a vunerable, senitive statement..

Best of luck in your pursuit...someday I am sure I will get to say that I met the guy from Pensive State on the Creedfeed board before they got big...

Rock On

Oh and like I said before...please come share in Creatve Corner... we always welcome new and appreciate your comments too!!
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Old 05-30-2003, 05:13 PM   #10
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Awesome, thanks. Will do!
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Old 05-30-2003, 09:47 PM   #11
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I can´t listen to your stuff wonder why

I´ll try the live stuff and then I´ll come back to this thread

welcome, Jake!
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Old 05-31-2003, 01:55 AM   #12
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If you can't download the songs from our website, you can stream a song off of our mp3.com website, here's the link: www.mp3.com/pensivestatefan
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Old 05-31-2003, 04:07 AM   #13
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Jake, from what I see it's a really good website! :P

Who writes the lyrics? They are really really good. Keep up the good work!
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Old 05-31-2003, 02:57 PM   #14
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That would be me :embarass: Thank you very much.
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Old 06-01-2003, 12:28 AM   #15
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You´re really good!!! I mean it!
Walk away...really nice! I liked the guitarist style!
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