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Old 06-23-2008, 10:32 PM   #1
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Goodbye

Through the sky
The pendulum swings

Like a light that
Doesnt feel your love

Hold my hand
Break the bread
On this road we walk

On these clouds
Fluffy clouds
Not a rain will drop

The sky is blue
So are you
Don't let me see you stop

The sun will shine
Forever If you ever
Need some help

So don't let me ever, ever
See you stop
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Old 06-24-2008, 08:10 PM   #2
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nagpo you can feel a beautiful display of faith that unseen faith feel you have in something or some one with just a whisper of being unselfish but the poem itselfs reflects a hurricane of that your a very diverse writer and all young writers Are But Day Of The Dead Was My Favorite nagpo
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Old 06-24-2008, 08:50 PM   #3
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Old 06-26-2008, 09:06 AM   #4
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Quote: (Originally Posted by nagpo) cool
you own it baby brother you own come on come on
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