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Old 11-03-2005, 10:46 PM   #1
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Threshold

someone left a message for you, someone really cares
they know that you are missing from the things they share
your not as invisisble as you think you are
you're not an object or a pawn

step away from
that threshold
don't imbrace it
that's no ending

there is a warm hand on your back , in everything you lack
there is a promise just for you, someone to see you through
today this is a gift, that one day you will see
tomarrow holds much more, than tears and a dream

Your not the only one who feels astray
fallen through the cracks without a name
Ive been through that fire and made amend
all this time at the healer's hands

step away from
that threshold
don't embrace it
that's no ending
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Old 11-04-2005, 09:36 AM   #2
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You Wont Miss Heaven

well if uncertian one is giving out his opion i will too from reading it and it sounds like its coming from a christian prespective you can never go wrong with a good title as well Can SAY A LOT And Reveal more about where a poem or a song is coming from also still leaving it open for many different messages i would have it called it You Wont Miss Heaven
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