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11-03-2005, 10:46 PM | #1 |
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Threshold
someone left a message for you, someone really cares
they know that you are missing from the things they share your not as invisisble as you think you are you're not an object or a pawn step away from that threshold don't imbrace it that's no ending there is a warm hand on your back , in everything you lack there is a promise just for you, someone to see you through today this is a gift, that one day you will see tomarrow holds much more, than tears and a dream Your not the only one who feels astray fallen through the cracks without a name Ive been through that fire and made amend all this time at the healer's hands step away from that threshold don't embrace it that's no ending |
11-04-2005, 09:36 AM | #2 |
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You Wont Miss Heaven
well if uncertian one is giving out his opion i will too from reading it and it sounds like its coming from a christian prespective you can never go wrong with a good title as well Can SAY A LOT And Reveal more about where a poem or a song is coming from also still leaving it open for many different messages i would have it called it You Wont Miss Heaven
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