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Old 04-04-2005, 11:35 PM   #1
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Dead end

A strong passion...
Nothing wrong with that...
Pondering on it...
These feelings I harbor...
A strong passion...
Scares me to death...
Knowing every book has an ending...
Aware nothing last...
Having the understanding...
That there will be times...
When I fall and you wont be there to catch me...
Having that knowlege kills me...
A part of me dies...
Everytime...
Some people dont want to acknowledge...
The fact that forever isn't for a while...
But me...
I'm stuck accepting it...
Falling for you so hard...
The air you breath is sweet...
The depth of whats happening to me...
So deep...
Not knowing if your down there with me...
Strikes fear in my heart...
Everything has an stopping point...
Theres always an ending...
is this a dead end...
A passion so strong...
Too strong...
I dont want another promise...
I need a guarentee...
What do you want...
I cant be just another episode in your life...
That would hurt so bad...
Make me believe we could always be friends...
Even when its over...
But how can I ask that much...
Selfish I guess...
Tired of searching for something greater...
I want this to last...
Not like the things of the past...
Demanding a great deal...
I know...
I understand if you say you have too go...
But are you leading me on the path of forever...
Or to the dead end...
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With joy found...
The music in my head loud...
Joyful noises sound...
Happiness surrounds...

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Old 04-05-2005, 12:34 AM   #2
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Well Written i liked it
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 04-05-2005, 09:09 AM   #3
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Quote: I understand if you say you have too go...
But are you leading me on the path of forever...
Or to the dead end...

like that part...enjoyed reading the whole piece...emotional...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
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Old 04-05-2005, 12:38 PM   #4
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oh my favorite was...........some people dont want to ackknowlege the fact that forever is,nt for a while but me im stuck accepting it Keeeeeeeeeeeeeel
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 04-05-2005, 02:31 PM   #5
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Thank you both very much I enjoyed writting it and Im glad you have favorite parts!!Thanks again
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Old 04-05-2005, 05:23 PM   #6
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Your Welcome
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Hush child I,ll tell you why you have Loved Me when you were weak you have given me unselfishly Kept you From Falling Falling everywhere But Your Kness you set me free to live my life you become my Reason To Survive The Great Divide you Set Me Free Ooh Our Love Is Beautiful Ooh isn,t This Beautiful Child It Seems You Have Been My Everything
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Old 04-06-2005, 11:00 AM   #7
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ditto...
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In sleep he sang to me, in dreams he came
That voice which calls to me and speaks my name
And do I dream again, for now I find
The phantom of the opera is there...inside my mind

Christine/ Phantom Of The Opera


Abondon thought and let the dream decend....
Point of No Return/Phantom Of The Opera


You will forever remain the music
And I…the song you sing
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Old 04-10-2005, 08:01 PM   #8
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Nice job, HR...
This is my favorite part:

Tired of searching for something greater...
I want this to last...
Not like the things of the past...
Demanding a great deal...
I know...
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Old 04-11-2005, 04:29 PM   #9
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thank you very much!
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