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Thoughts of Suicide
"The hopeless world,it burns
The sands of time,they turn The memories we had, they're all no more The moments we shared, they're all tourchered We're the hopeless,we have no where to turn Body's are dropping everywhere,will we ever learn? We just never thought it could happen to you We always thought you knew what was true I guess we were all wrong Thats the reason I had to write this song Just moments ago it happend And we could feel the world start to beckon We all felt the world stop turning As the the chanes of death started burning Our tears, they fall in the night They break to peices and shed no light They scream the words you cannot hear They are broken into fear You couldnt try to say The words that would take away These thousand tears we've cried For after all you commited suicide" I just wrote this a second ago,hope you like it
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Wow, excellent. Keep up the great work. And it really has a unique point to it, good job.
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Wow That Was Very Moving I Can Feel The Hurt And Pain In Everyword You Wrote It Well My
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DEEP, MAN VERY DEEP . You have a flare for writing some great work.
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Very good Kevin
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What??? You guys liked that???
Well,thanks!!!  I am gonna write "Beautiful as Hell" now...its taking me a long time to write because of the way i want it written,but you guys will (hopefully) be happy with it. (Im still hoping it comes out good,haha)
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I liked it cuz I can relate to the feelings in it
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OK,well,thanks
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I don't know anyone that has committed suicide or even tried, I've never tried either but I thought about it more than once in my life when I went through some really tough times
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ohh,im sorry to hear that Julie,but Im glad you pulled through
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Thanks
I'm glad to!Really glad that time in my life is past me now 
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im sure it will as always
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awww julie im sorry to here that ive been to the point were i came a hair of doing so but praise god and creed of course im here telling you about this right now Peace
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Its good that your here to
It sucks during times like that BIG TIME!
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tell me about it
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